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Administration revises the incentive plan
Who: Bowie administration
What: A new incentive.
Where: Bowie High School.
When: 2017-2018 school year.
Why: To get students to come to class
How: Students can skip some of the finals if they have a good attendance.
This story is about how the Bowie administration revised the incentive plant to allow two incentives. These incentives were sort of passes that allowed students to miss finals as long as they had good attendance and good grade, but the problem was with only one incentive if students got sick there is nothing they could do about it. That is why Bowie decided to revise the plan and allow two incentives, so if students got sick or missed class because of something they can't control they wouldn't be punished.
Ann Widner, Emily Leeke, Shikha Patel, Emily Robinett. They are direct quotes.
This story is about how the Bowie administration revised the incentive plant to allow two incentives. These incentives were sort of passes that allowed students to miss finals as long as they had good attendance and good grade, but the problem was with only one incentive if students got sick there is nothing they could do about it. That is why Bowie decided to revise the plan and allow two incentives, so if students got sick or missed class because of something they can't control they wouldn't be punished.
Ann Widner, Emily Leeke, Shikha Patel, Emily Robinett. They are direct quotes.
Yes there are transition sentences that are opinions. The opinions are that they are in heavy favor of the new, revised incentive plan rather than the old one.
Yes it sums up the story because its about the revised incentive plan and how it has affected students.
Yes it sums up the story because its about the revised incentive plan and how it has affected students.
Bowie organizations soar to new heights with drones on campus
Who: Bowie students.
What: Bowie High school is now implementing drones.
Where: Bowie High School
When: 2017-2018 school year
Why: So students can be more successful
How: Students are being taught how to fly and use drones and they are using them for photography and other extra cirricular activities.
This story is about how bowie students and teachers are starting to implement drones in their classes. These drones are used for photography, football and even JROTC has its own drone course.
Chanel Dobrzenki, Andrew Nourse, Nick Moczygemba and Luke Leifker. They use direct quotes because its actually what they said.
I didn't find any opinions they use facts during the transition sentences.
Yes, I feel it smmarizes the story because it shows how bowies starting to use drones.
Chanel Dobrzenki, Andrew Nourse, Nick Moczygemba and Luke Leifker. They use direct quotes because its actually what they said.
I didn't find any opinions they use facts during the transition sentences.
Yes, I feel it smmarizes the story because it shows how bowies starting to use drones.
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Technology due to arrive in January
Who: Bowie Students
What: Bowie students getting their own personal chromebooks.
Where: Bowie High School
When:
What: Bowie students getting their own personal chromebooks.
Where: Bowie High School
When:
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